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Great gods! I drew in MS Paint again!
These are my characters Rono and Crystelle. Rono is the son of Mathin and Oceana, the elder brother of Poseidon and Leina, and the heir to the throne of Nutopia if something happens to his little brother. He knows that he will unconsciously sing his merman love song to Crystelle someday, he just hopes it doesn't happen before he tells her he isn't human.
Crystelle is the daughter of a Nutopian nobleman. She went to Origin Island for her schooling because her parents disliked King Rotis. She boards with Yuuki Nyotia's family and goes to the school by the pond at the other side of the island. She has a crush on Rono Sebastian Nyotia, but is afraid to tell him.
Both characters belong to me.
This is the first time I'm requesting critiques, so please don't be too terribly harsh. ^^'
These are my characters Rono and Crystelle. Rono is the son of Mathin and Oceana, the elder brother of Poseidon and Leina, and the heir to the throne of Nutopia if something happens to his little brother. He knows that he will unconsciously sing his merman love song to Crystelle someday, he just hopes it doesn't happen before he tells her he isn't human.
Crystelle is the daughter of a Nutopian nobleman. She went to Origin Island for her schooling because her parents disliked King Rotis. She boards with Yuuki Nyotia's family and goes to the school by the pond at the other side of the island. She has a crush on Rono Sebastian Nyotia, but is afraid to tell him.
Both characters belong to me.
This is the first time I'm requesting critiques, so please don't be too terribly harsh. ^^'
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactThis piece is original, it being your own characters. The pose and situation isn't common either. The shadows are realistic, and the metal of the wheelchair looks great.
The background seems sort of plain. I suppose they could be sitting right against the wall, but I think it would be better if there was something behind them.
The technique could be better. I think you've learned a lot since this, but I'll say it anyway. One, the clothes wouldn't fall so straight and perfectly. There would be creases, wrinkles, places with shadow. It seems that a lot of things are one color, without tones and shades. The fingers seem a bit off. I think a lot of this is because of the program, though.
I think your work has progressed considerably since this, but all in all, it's pretty good.